It has been some time since I’ve posted on the blog. I discovered that no matter what I try I just don’t have the time to do it all. And I want to, but I can’t. So my fiction writing had to come first.
It is that time of year again, when my writing buddy and I head off on our annual writing retreat. Last year was a great success at 6 nights so we repeated that this year in the hope of similar success. We nearly fell at the first hurdle when someone else had booked our usual time. But the writing gods were with us, or poor planning on their part, and they cancelled and we were in. Every year I say we need to book earlier.
We did our usual drive down together, the little car piled high with bags and computers and a whiteboard. We stopped along the way to shop (for lots of food we then had to pack up and bring home again) and a solid lunch. I left my handbag in the café (for the first time ever) and complete panic set in once I realised but they had put it away somewhere safe, and the older gentleman at the table next to ours was very quick to tell me it was ok when I came barrelling back into the shop.
Supplies purchased, good meal in our bellies and with too much wine packed we were off.
We kept the fire stoked and my writing buddy had her first roasted marshmallow experience. It rained nearly the entire time which was fine but a part of us hoped for snow.
After razzing my writing buddy for leaving the cottage last year, I decided that some exercise and fresh air would be needed. I wasn’t quite as dedicated as her but I did join her for 2 walks and even practiced some of my tap dancing (still a long way to go). I ate far too much sugar and maybe drank a little too much wine.
I’m sure you are wondering about the writing and yes, I did some, in fact I did a lot. I worked through my novel, Raven’s Edge 4 times. One really focused edit, where I added lots, changed lots, chopped bits and rearranged whole sections. Then I read through to make sure those changes all worked, made some more and added notes.
For the third read through I only focused on my added notes – where I had marked where something didn’t work. So it was a little quicker as I wasn’t reading the entire work. Then I went through one more time, reading every word and making sure it all worked. I tweaked some sentences, moved some chapters or parts of and fixed a couple of little bits that still didn’t sit quite right.
Overall I am pretty happy with the story and my brain was tired. I couldn’t look over it again and the next step it to send it out to beta-readers to see what they say. And it just may be that there is a lot more work to do.
That was the main focus of the trip this year, and I spent some time looking over the blurb again – but I must admit that is something I really struggle with. I did a little planning for the rest of Iski’s story and some general writing life planning too.
I did get lots of sleep and despite the amount of brain draining work I do feel pretty good for it. I took a spare laptop as I worried about my old faithful and ended up swapping over on the first full day after repeated warnings and alerts. Last year I managed to get quite a lot of reading done too. This year I only read three or four chapters and a short non-fiction book. I’m feeling excited about this book, and what is to come and I’m hoping I can ride the enthusiasm of the writing retreat for at least the next few months.